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I can see my reflection in your tear,
I find this difficult to say,
There is too much to fear;

We talked for hours that day,
Going to meet at that station;
For once, going to have it my way.

The perfect plan to escape our situation;
To run from this world of loneliness.
Together, going away with no destination.

She was left there with no one to caress,
And me with a broken heart;
Could not find her in that crowded mess.

I find this difficult to say,
In this sad world of ours;
Maybe we are better off this way.
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It's been a while since I posted something, so here is a work in progress. Not that I have many readers. I know this is kinda melancholy for the mood I am now, but its better then nothing right. This should be a lesson kids, lay off the scotch.

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want me to proofread?
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go for it girl. i am open to some criticism.

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"There is to much to fear;" the first "to" needs 2 o's
"Could not find here in that crowded mess." Do you mean here (the place) or her (the person)?
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Ouch, grammar and spelling. My main handicaps to creativity. Thx

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